I need feedback on my new original song.?

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thats my music myspace profile, just what you think? what could be different? what does the song make you think of or feel when you hear it?

I need feedback on my new original song.?

hmm i liked it, the title itself made me wish i could remember all the fine details from my past

I need feedback on my new original song.?

it's pretty good. only thing i would say is that maybe work on the pronounciation of your words because some of them are hard to understand. nice voice thought =] %26amp; we live pretty close to eachother

I need feedback on my new original song.?

i think you could pronounce the words a bit clearer.

But i think the lyrics were deep and meaningful, and it made me feel wistfull and sad. your good.

I need feedback on my new original song.?

IHaunting is the best description i could use.. it's sad, and very evocative.

However, and i think others will say the same, the diction is unclear. I'd needed several hearings of it to decipher all the words.

Your voice, however is quite unique. I mean THAT in a good way. you don't seem to be imitating anyone.