I wrote some songs and posted them on myspace. If you would so kindly, please check them out and give me your opinions. Each song is a bit different than the other.
You can check them out at www.myspace.com/jsandlin
Is my music any good?
i liked It's All Good To Me probably the best, it was very Beattles / Muse... but I liked it... you could probably get an acoustic piano in there too since that's what you play :) I like the lyrics in this one and your voice works the best for it.
I work as a composer in the games industry so I hope my critique stands for something (as much as anyone else here!).
Your compositions are sound, I skimmed through all 4 songs and the only thing I didn't like in your structure was how slow SOUL was, it had a good vibe, but after the first two lines 'Soul, Soul' ... i felt lost.. i felt like I wanted a verse, and not ambience... I think it would sound great with an acoustic piano or acoustic guitar playing mellow chords in some sort of traditional sequence.
As for mixing, I can't say too much because I'm on my laptop, the voice came across harsh at times, more compression (higher ratio or lower threshold) will balance that out... the thing about mixing is... you can learn it... providing you don't deafen yourself first :-) you have the material, largely production is down to how much you can afford to spend on cool synths, guitars, effects, speakers and so forth... sadly its a money game :/
good work.
David
Is my music any good?
ya it is its awesome
Is my music any good?
I don't think the music or lyrics are too terrible, but your voice reminds me of Adam Sandler or Weird Al Yankovic.
Is my music any good?
I got good news and bad news!
First the bad!
You have to get control of your voice! Take more air in when you sing, control the release and your voice won't waver so often. Get some voice coaching from a pro and they'll straighten that out for you.
Now, the good news!
Your songwriting is good. Your execution (except for an occasional wavering vocal) is good. And your musicianship is good. i.e. good solid musical structures.
I'm assuming these are mere "notebook collections" of tunes that you will eventually arrange and orchestrate.
All in all I'd give you a 93 out of 100.
Copyright your work!!!
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Is my music any good?
where can we check them
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